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How to write email requests

08.07.2010, 13:59
Business English - Having trouble asking for something in writing? Get idea how to formulate your request to get results

Requests for information about goods or services are exchanged among business people all the time. In a routine request written via email, follow these guidelines:

1.       Write clearly what you want - general information, a catalogue, price list, sample, quotation, etc.

2.      Most suppliers write about their terms of payment in their reply so you do not have to ask them to write any details.

3.       Keep your request brief and informative

Requests mean potential business, so they must be replied as quickly as possible. If it is from existing customer, say how much you like it; if it is from future customer, say you are happy to receive it and express the hope of a friendly business relationship.

Routine requests

Suppliers receive many routine requests for catalogues, price lists, samples and even advice. When a customer asks for catalogue, price list or some samples without any other details it is enough to sent him those with so-called ‘compliments slip' [a small printed note containing the company's name, address, contact numbers and the wording ‘with compliments'].

In the following request, written reply is not necessary:

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To: Táto e-mailová adresa je chránená pred spamovacími robotmi. Na jej zobrazenie potrebujete mať nainštalovaný JavaScript.

Subject: request

 

Dear Sir:

Please send me a copy of your catalogue and price list of vending machines, together with a copy of any leaflets that I could pass to future customers.

Regards

 
 

First requests

When your request is to a company whom you have never contacted before, always write how you got their name, email address and give some details about your own business. A reply to a first request should be given special attention in order to create positive atmosphere.

Request with numbered points

When you have many points on which information is needed, it may be useful to number various points. It makes your email simple and easy-to-understand.

Sample request:

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To: Táto e-mailová adresa je chránená pred spamovacími robotmi. Na jej zobrazenie potrebujete mať nainštalovaný JavaScript.

Subject: request

 

Dear Sir:

During a visit to the Ideal Office Exhibition we saw many pieces of your steel furniture. We think this type of furniture would be suitable for our offices, but we have not been able to find any supplier here in Slovakia.

Would you please give us the following information:

1 Is there any company that delivers your products in Slovakia?

2 Do you assemble the furniture or can you recommend us any specialist?

3 In what colours and designs can the furniture be supplied?

 

We would be happy if you could help us with these matters.

Best

 

 

Regards

 

 
 

 

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To: Táto e-mailová adresa je chránená pred spamovacími robotmi. Na jej zobrazenie potrebujete mať nainštalovaný JavaScript.

Subject: RE: request

 

Dear Mr Kovac:

Thank you for your request of 23 August regarding our steel office furniture. A copy of our catalogue is in attachment showing the designs and range of colours.

Office Masters, Karadzicova 34, Bratislava is a very reliable company which provides delivery and assembling. We have cooperated since 1994 and therefore we can recommend them to you. Their consultants will help you with all the matters, email contact: Táto e-mailová adresa je chránená pred spamovacími robotmi. Na jej zobrazenie potrebujete mať nainštalovaný JavaScript..

Do not hesitate to let me know if I can provide any further assistance.

Best

 

 
Reply:

 

Exercise 1: put these phrases into the correct order. They all appeared in the samples of requests and replies.

 

1.      me       please             a copy              of         send     catalogue         your

2.      following          give      would   please  us         the information you ?

3.      we       be        happy   if          matters             you      could                help                  us         would   with      these

4.      thank    23        August             for        your     you      request             of

5.      well-known      we       got       that      you      are       a partner          to know

6.      we       could    would   cooperating      appreciate        if          we      start

7.      from     to hear             soon     hope    you      we

8.      we       receive             very     pleased            to         your     were    email

 

KEY:

1.       Send me a copy of your catalogue, please.

2.       Would you please give us the following information ?

3         We would be happy if you could help us with these matters.

4.       Thank you for your request of 23 August.

5.       We got to know that you are a well-known partner.

6.       We would appreciate if we could start cooperating.

7.       We hope to hear from you soon.

8.      We were very pleased to receive your email.

 

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